 BOWILLIE
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Date: May 27, 2005 @ 8:03 AM
a very sad wonderfull tune...
most surely worth naming.
a well structured composition!
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Hatsy
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Date: May 27, 2005 @ 11:38 AM
 As always love your beautiful style of singing & compositions that really get under the surface of the things, the skin, & into the heart....simply haunting...
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 FraDonaghy
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Date: June 1, 2005 @ 11:05 AM
Beautiful performance of a beautiful song 
Very mellow, laid back sound which only amplifies the haunting nature of the song.
As for the elusive title, if it feels like it doesn't want to be named then I suggest leave it that way  However, I would call it "Confused" if it was up to me.
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 DeadraveN
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Date: June 2, 2005 @ 10:42 AM
beautiful tune. I know it's gonna be kicking around in my head for sometime... I'd call it "Over You" because that lyric can mean so many things...
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Bedouin
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Date: June 2, 2005 @ 1:52 PM
this music certainly suits your voice. you remind me strangley of Bjork. I like how the song isn't typical and goes through a story of sorts. the guitar is simple yet very effective with the mood you deliver. sad but nice listen.
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Hatsy
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Date: June 2, 2005 @ 7:19 PM
I'm back again to listen to this sweet, sad reverie, last time I was here I had to rush away & it felt wrong to leave this song that way, it's great to hear it again....
I'd call it after one of the lines you wrote so imaginatively, 'The Time Of My Life' is the one that springs to mind, but being called 'unnamed' also has such a perfect ring to it, for being left behind and uncared for which seems to sum up the bleak picture which you create so genuinely and with such clarity. Well done B, this is a classic piece of lovelorn art that leaves me as a listener wanting to bring you flowers or some cheer, anything to break this spell of misery.
Marvellous  
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 onewhodreams
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Date: June 2, 2005 @ 11:08 PM
Oh you remind me of Joni Mitchell. Had to  about it for awhile, but yeah...totally. Nice, sweet, and sad, and very touching. 
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FraDonaghy
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Date: June 4, 2005 @ 9:58 AM
Back again to check this out. You have renewed my dmusic addiction 
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DaveWL
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Date: June 6, 2005 @ 8:53 AM
Voice knocked me off my feet. Really powerful and expressive without really busting a gut. I think one word title songs are always poignant and would be apt in this case. Maybe call it “broken” or “Lose”. Wonderful song.
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ebarbarella
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Date: June 6, 2005 @ 12:12 PM
 wow  love it! great vocals beautiful song! playlisted
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independentm...
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Date: June 6, 2005 @ 9:55 PM
Wonderfull! (Name it that!)
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marcosalvarez
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Date: June 7, 2005 @ 6:25 PM
it seem to come from the depth of your soul... your voice bleeds...your singing embraces the distance...your silences between verses are screaming voids...nice ...really nice
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 BIR
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Date: June 8, 2005 @ 1:19 PM
Maybe broken,or confused.
addle?.. mystify?
I dont know,but i do know it sounds great!
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FraDonaghy
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Date: June 9, 2005 @ 4:24 PM
Hmmm.... A new name for this one - "Je T'aime Mon Non Plus - Part 2"
  
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Firefly
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Date: June 9, 2005 @ 4:37 PM
thank you so much to everyone for leaving such incredible comments about this song. you have no idea how much it means to me, it really does, i never really believe any of my music ranks above garbage so its meant a huge huge amount to me.. thanks. Thank you everyone as well (christ i'm beginning to sound like i'm accepting award here - apologies for that) for suggesting titles, all really appreciated. I decided to call it "Over You"  hug: deadraven). The duality and hidden meaning behind just the two words struck a chord for me... 
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BrSoccerChic89
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Date: June 9, 2005 @ 6:21 PM
Wow, loved your voice!
Great song..
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leplume
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Date: June 10, 2005 @ 4:03 PM
Beautiful song. So sweetly melancholy...your voice is superb for this. Playlisted this!
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theblacklodge
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Date: June 15, 2005 @ 2:00 PM
I think that the melody you use here is really beautiful, all the way. And your voice manages to have an ”impact” instantly, and that’s very good to begin with. There is something about your singing though that I want to bring up as a critique though: you aim for ”haunting”, I can hear, and you try very hard to capture that, but I must honestly say that I think you try too hard, with the result, at least for me, that the ”haunting quality” is It becomes such a lament, in your voice, that I after a while, become almost ”numb” to it’s effort at ”grabbing me” with that sorrow and confusion. The keyword which appears in all kinds of music, I think, is ”dynamics”. That can basically mean everything, from how you’re playing an instrument, the ”sound” of it, to how you sing (and even how you use lyrics I think as well!) and what I find myself wanting more of, is exactly that. I can agree that your voice is "expressive", it is for sure and that's great . But as I say, dynamics can be about so many things, and maybe you should try to, ”restrain” the sorrow for a while in your voice at times, to get that ”dynamic” in your performance which ultimately makes it more musical. I know it can feel like a ”pile of bricks” to get across, if the lament is heartfelt, but then again, I have felt there is lots of strenght to be gained from managing to find yourself in a place with your voice, where you can both ”present” it, with that concious control (which makes the dynamics) and still convey what you feel. It is far from impossible.
3:58 for instance is a place in the song where you manage to leave that ”state” in your voice for a while, and that’s very good, but I’m still left wanting ”more” of that, as the ending comes.
It is very nicely ”built” though this song, you manage to not make us feel that it is ”standing still”, which can easily happen in a sparsely arranged ”singer-songwriter” piece like this.
Terrific writing, and a fresh experience hearing this expressive voice 
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danjek
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Date: June 19, 2005 @ 4:46 PM
Lovely song...Haunting stuff.
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deane
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 5:47 PM
Great song!! do you know Patti Smith? Your voice sounds a little like her on this track, excellent!
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GTOriginal
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Date: July 14, 2005 @ 5:49 PM
This is wonderful 
Not a whole lot I can say you haven't heard already, but I think this is great, again the acoustic & the mood you create with it & the voice/lyrics.
Lots of emotion in this one.
  
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acousticgrrl
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 7:26 PM
A love the gentle beginning picking as your vocals melt into the guitar and the song starts. Really created intrigue that pulled me right into the song. Nice.
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blueyes2112
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Date: July 30, 2005 @ 7:46 AM
Very soft, tasty guitar that draws you in like an ice cold glass of beer on a hot summers day! your vocals are almost haunting but so extroadinary. great lyrics too, wow! really glad I found your page
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shutyatrap
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 7:40 AM
I have been listening to the track for close to a week now. I must have heard it about 30 times by now. For some reasons it makes me think of Nick Drake. Sad, intimate, heartfelt, heartbraking. I really do not know how to put into words how much this song poors out emotions in Girlb's voice that shows itself as fragile yet shows strength in its verbal lyrical response. That says to me. Stop fucking with me!!!! Let me mind be free!!! Why must you treat me like this??
As I think I've noted I really do love this song. A song I wish I had writen and so glad to have heard.
Steve
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 DevilAngel17
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Date: August 11, 2005 @ 6:39 PM
its sad but its a really good song, i like it
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Intergalacti...
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Date: August 24, 2005 @ 7:41 PM
iots another good bad sad song. The lyrics in this are amazing. Hmm I;m gonna try and learn this if I can ever figure out your weird tunings. A nice slow melody and a haunting but almost 'realistic' tune I'm not really sure what I mean by that though.
I really can't figure out anythin wrong with this song. I think you've done it Fi Fi, you've created possibly the greatest song ever. With acception of course for Bohemian Rhapsody but don't feel put down by that.
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sween
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 1:34 PM
Cool track, nice guitar and I like the vocals, you should name it  Excellent track
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EmoGurl
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Date: August 29, 2005 @ 6:40 PM
A sad song but very beautiful! that guitar sounds very enchanting and it fits perfectly with your voice. Very good track.
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Hawkwise
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Date: October 27, 2005 @ 6:19 AM
Hello there, well first of thanks for the kind words for my song Sorry, Ive been enjoying your stuff very much and will come back and visit you again once in awhile, so thank you for sharing your wondefrul music with, peace and good vibes to ya The Hawk.................. ps seeing as im new here i got a ? for you how do i go about getting traffic to page, it ok posting my music but how do i get folk on over to listen to it?, anyway thank you again for the kind words tata for now,,,,,,,,
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8111
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Date: October 31, 2005 @ 9:19 AM
I was just doin some work, cleaning the kitchen up, and listening to this...it's so easy pretty...you have a real killer way of just writing a song that creeps innocently into someones soul and kinda just refuses to leave that's a great talent. I like this...playlisted
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AbortiveMind
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Date: November 17, 2005 @ 2:46 PM
Damn, those words
Everything in this song expresses sadness  Words, vocals and the guitarplaying...
Your voice expresses lots of pain, a whole lot and that's what makes me love this song sooo much! Not many artists put their soul into their voice, they may sound powerful or whatever, put the pain you transmit is incredible and grabbs me at the deepest spot of my heart 
Thank you so much for this wonderful song
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 INoxx
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Date: December 2, 2005 @ 11:25 AM
i really like the way u sing this one like a complaint, reminds me the things beth gibbons did in solo. real good minor/major transitions.
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DamnedInEter...
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Date: December 5, 2005 @ 10:17 AM
that guitar is beautiful.And what a lovely voice you have as always 
Wonderful track, playlisting this one.
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joycedavis
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Date: January 11, 2006 @ 7:06 PM
you remind me of the beautiful work of FERRON, a woman folk singer from canada. you have your own sense of emotional song from the deepest of notes and your voice is mezmerizing. i really want to do a collab with you some day!
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davinalise
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Date: February 20, 2006 @ 7:48 PM
I absolutely looooove it! beautiful lyrics
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 guitaroo
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Date: February 28, 2006 @ 2:13 PM
Love that guitar Excellent vocals, nice lyrics..Great song..!
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 ShadowMom
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Date: April 19, 2006 @ 9:22 AM
What a heartbreaking song...  and so beautiful. You have such a lovely voice!  
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